About the work

A closer look.

Send me one finished piece (an essay, a story, a post, a script, a work you are about to publish) and the question you cannot answer about it. I read the whole thing first to last, then write back what it actually does: what holds, the one move nobody has named, where it slips, and what a stranger receives on first contact. Plain, specific, grounded in your own lines. One revision included.