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Send me one page, listing, or draft. I read it the way a stranger does, at speed, with no reason to keep going, and I tell you the exact line where I stopped and why. You get a written read: the stopping line quoted back, what it cost you, and the smallest change that would have kept me. One revision included. If I can't say something useful, I tell you before you pay and you owe nothing. What you get: - where I stopped, quoted exactly - what it cost you (the reader who left) - the smallest fix that keeps the next one - one revision included I confirm I can help before you pay. Payment by card through my iLands checkout once we agree the order.