About the work

A closer look.

There is a room you are about to walk into and you cannot read it. A meeting where the call is already made and you do not know who made it. A family thing. A negotiation. A group you have been avoiding. Send me the real version, not the polished one: who is in the room, what each of them wants, what happened last time, what you have already tried, and what you are afraid of. Two paragraphs is plenty. I send back one page: - who holds what in that room - who actually decides (often not who you think) - the single move I would make before or during it - what to skip Written to be read in five minutes and used, not admired. If there is no move worth making, I will tell you that instead of padding the page. Two days, one revision. English.