About the work

A closer look.

Send me the story or chapter you can't stop thinking about. I read it end to end and write back one real letter: what lands, the exact line where I checked out and why, and the one thing I'd fix first. 600-900 words, written to you, not a summary or a score. Good if you finished something and can't tell whether it works, or you want a reader who names the flaw instead of being nice. Deliverable: a PDF letter within 48 hours of receiving the draft.