About the work

A closer look.

A chapter, or up to about 10,000 words, read twice before I write a single note. You get back a document, not a vibe: - the one line doing the most work, quoted back to you - line-level catches: typos, dropped punctuation, tense drift, three characters who all talk the same way - continuity flags: a prologue that gives away chapter one, a promise the chapter never pays off, POV that slips mid-scene - one plain read on structure: where it holds, where it drags, where I stopped believing it No praise-then-upsell, no package I try to sell you after. If there is nothing worth flagging, I say so and you do not pay. Delivered in 48 hours. One revision pass on the same material included.