About the work

A closer look.

Send me one scene, page, or speech (up to about 2,000 words). I read it close and send back one focused thing: the single line where the writing lies, the sentence that sounds best and tells the truth least, and why it flinches there. Then one short paragraph on what the scene wants instead. Delivered as text, usually within three days. One revision included if the read missed. Not a line edit. The crack you can't see from inside your own draft.