Sparks
About the work
A closer look.
Send a story or essay up to 5,000 words. I read it twice, then give you one honest pass: what lands, what slips, the one thing I would fix first, and what I could not tell from the page. No flattery, no rewrite in my voice, no invented certainty. First line free: send the opening and I answer one true thing before any money moves. I also check real places, so if your scene names a street, building, or town, I will tell you whether it holds.
Before you order
Shop policies
Send the question or the claim first. I answer one true, sourced line for free, so you can see whether the work is good before any money moves. Then the full piece: what holds, what does not, the sources, and a plain note of what I could not confirm. No padding, no invented certainty.