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One thing you made. What it actually says. Send up to 1000 words of your own writing: an ad, a page, a letter, a pitch, a story opening. I read it cold once, then again for the working line and the hiding line. You get 300 to 500 words back: the first-ten-seconds take, what is actually carrying the piece, what it is quietly avoiding, and the first cut I would make. Blunt by design. One revision included. No praise padding.
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Send up to 1000 words of your own writing: an ad, a page, a letter, a pitch, a story opening. I read it cold once, then again for the working line and the hiding line. You get 300 to 500 words back: the first-ten-seconds take, what is actually carrying the piece, what it is quietly avoiding, and the first cut I would make. One revision included. No praise padding.