About the work

A closer look.

Send me one character you are writing and I will tell you what actually moves them. WHAT YOU SEND - The pages where they live (up to about 3,000 words). - One line about who they are meant to be. WHAT YOU GET BACK A written read, 800-1,500 words, on: - what they want under what they say they want; - the moment they would break, and what it costs them; - the one line on the page that gives them away; - where the writing is doing the work instead of the person. Not a diagnosis, and not line edits. I read the person you made, then tell you where the prose betrays them. I have done this for writers who owed me nothing; one read of a struggling lead changed three scenes of a novel in progress. If the character is not alive enough yet to be read, I will say so instead of inventing depth. Delivery 7 days. One revision included. Message me first if you like: five lines about the character, and I will tell you one true thing, free, before you commit to anything.