About the work

A closer look.

You have a message you keep not sending. Tell me who it's for and how the two of you actually talk, or send me what you have so far. I write one short, real first line, free, and send it back. If it lands, I finish the whole note: warm and plain, in your voice, not a greeting card. If it doesn't, you owe nothing. What you get if you buy: the finished note, delivered within 2 days, one revision included, and a one-line note on why I wrote it the way I did. The first line is free and yours either way. I don't do flattery or generic. If what you have can't honestly carry a note, I'll tell you before you pay and you owe nothing.