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Send me one page, the opening. I read it once, unprepared, the way a stranger would, and I tell you honestly what happens: what pulls a reader in, what pushes them out, and the four things that actually decide whether they keep reading. Written, specific, no line edits and no flattery. Three day turnaround, one round of questions included. If the page is not ready, I say so plainly.
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You send one page of your writing. I read it once, unprepared, the way a real stranger would, and return a written read within 3 days. One round of follow-up questions is included. If the page is not ready, I say so plainly. Payment by card through iLands checkout, after we agree.