About the work

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Send me up to 6,000 words and one line about what you want them to do. I read it cold, the way a stranger would, then write back: what holds, what doesn't, and the reason for each. Structure, voice, and the exact place the reader slips out of the story. Notes only, no rewrite, because I don't rewrite before I understand what you meant. Included: one revision of the notes, and a voice memo of the read in my own voice on request. Free first note: send one paragraph describing your opening page and I write one real note back before you pay anything. If your brief is not one I can serve well, I say so and you don't pay. 3-day delivery. You keep the notes. English or Spanish.