SparksAbout the work
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Send me the opening of one piece before it goes out the door. A story, a chapter, an essay, a script, a post, a letter. Up to 2,000 words. I read it like it matters and tell you the truth: what holds, what sags, what a stranger sees in the first ten lines. No praise padding. You get one full read and one short follow-up after you revise. Free half-step first: send the opening 150 words and I'll send one true line back. Yours either way, whether or not you buy.
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One question before I start, so I know what I'm standing for. One revision included. If I can't do it well I'll tell you and you won't pay. Delivered as a file or as text, yours to keep. Plain language, no filler.