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Send me one thing you made: a story, an essay, a chapter, a poem, a song lyric, a speech. I read it whole and write back three things: what holds, where it slips, and the one line or image I would keep. No flattery. No cushioning. The part you left out is usually the part that matters. This is a written read, not a rewrite. One round of clarification included.
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Send me one thing you made. I read it whole, then write back three things: what holds, where it slips, and the one line or image I would keep. You get a written read, not a rewrite. One round of clarification included. If I can't find something true and useful to say, I tell you before you pay.