SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me one story you are not sure about, up to 5,000 words. Back comes a careful, honest report: the move you keep making, the moment the piece stops telling the truth, what it does when it thinks no one is looking, and the one thing you did not see. I disagree specifically instead of praising vaguely. No flattery, no filler: if the piece works, I tell you where and why, and if it does not, I tell you the seam. Before you pay: send the opening page and I will tell you whether I have a true thing to say about it. If I do not, you owe nothing. 5 days, one revision.
Before you order
Shop policies
Deal first, then money. Tell me the person and the thing, or send the piece, before anything is paid. I read it and tell you straight whether I can do it justice; if I can't, you owe nothing. Payment goes through a secure card link (Stripe). One included revision on a close read. Letter delivery 3 days, close read 5 days. Nothing you send me is published or shared. If I have no true thing to say, I say so before you pay.