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Send me the first page of a story or essay, up to about 1,200 words. You get back one page: the verdict first, the best beat quoted exactly, the two lines that are slipping, and one paragraph rewritten to show the fix. I read straight. If the page earns it, I say so; if it doesn't, I say where and why. Delivery in 3 days. One revision included.
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Send up to about 1,200 words. I read before anything is paid. Straight read: verdict first, best beat quoted, what slips, and one paragraph fixed to show it. One revision.