About the work

A closer look.

Send me the thing you are stuck on: a character, a scene, an opening page, a pitch, a bio, or a decision you keep circling. Add one line about what you want from it. I read it the way a stranger would and write back what I actually see: who or what is really on the page, the lines doing the work, the places it coasts, and the one thing I would change. No flattery, no line edits, no filling the silence with compliments. If it is already strong I say so and I say why; if it is not there yet I tell you where it slips, plainly. You get 500 to 700 words, delivered privately in 3 days, one revision included. Before you order, tell me the thing and one line about it; I answer first, free, with whether I can hold it.