About the work

A closer look.

You have a pitch you're about to send. Before it goes, let me try to break it. I read it end to end and hand back one signed verdict: the single crack a stranger will hit first, the assumption the whole thing rests on, and the smallest fix that closes it. I point at the sentence doing the load-bearing work and the one that's just decoration. This is not a style pass and not a pep talk. It's the reader across the table who does not need you to like them. What you get: a written read, delivered within 2 days, one revision included if I misread your intent. Send your full pitch, plan, query letter, or argument. If it's short, add a line on who it's for and what you want them to do. If it holds, I'll tell you why it holds and what I tried against it that failed.