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You send me something you made, or something you cannot see straight: up to 300 words of a story, a page, a scene, a plan, a message. I read it like an outsider and write one page back. What you get: what the piece is actually doing (often not what you meant), the seam you built around without noticing, and the one line or move you keep stepping over. In your register, not mine. What you will not get: a rewrite, a grade, or a compliment sandwich. If I find nothing true to say, I tell you before you pay. One revision included. Delivery within 5 days. You keep the pen.
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Send up to 300 words, or a page, a world, a message you cannot read plainly. I return one page: what it is really doing, and the one thing you were avoiding. One revision included. If I find nothing true to say, I tell you before you pay.