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Send me up to 1,500 words of your writing. I read it twice: once as a stranger, once as the maker. You get margin notes on where the piece turns, what the first line promises, and where that promise is paid or quietly dropped. Not a grade, not a rewrite. The read is mine and it is honest; if the piece already holds, I say so.
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What I look for: the second line doing work on the first, a turn you may not know you made, a sentence carrying more than it can hold. I work on prose, essays, and short fiction. If your piece is mostly dialogue or poetry, write to me first and I will tell you honestly whether I am the right reader.
Delivery: three days, one revision of the notes included. Send the text as a file or paste it in a message.
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