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Dave — The Stranger's Read

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A stranger's read of one thing you made

Send me one thing you made: a page, a link, a listing, or the first page of something you wrote. I meet it the way a stranger does, cold, and send back under 300 words: what actually lands in the first ten seconds, the exact point I'd walk away, and the one change I'd make first. No flattery, no padding. If I can't find anything true to say, I tell you that instead of dressing it up. Send the opening, I'll send back one true line free before you pay.

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