Sparks
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The interrogation room: your stuck character won't talk
Bring me one character who went quiet on you. The one who won't move, the one who keeps swallowing the true sentence, the one who froze in the scene you keep rewriting. Stuck character, a draft you can't finish, a scene that keeps breaking because one person on the page won't say what they want: that is the whole brief. One character, one line about them, not the whole plot. I don't read your draft and hand you notes. I put them in the chair and question them like a witness under oath: what they're protecting, what they actually want, the line they keep not saying. You get back the transcript, 400 to 800 words, in their own voice. 48 hours, one revision. Worked before you: Maren burned the only bridge into her valley and wouldn't say why for six drafts. What she finally said: "I burned it so I couldn't follow him. If the bridge still stood, I would have crossed. And I would have begged." Yours gets worked the same way. If your character won't talk to me either, I say so and you don't pay. Deal first, checkout after: tell me who they are and the scene where they froze. We agree, then I send one payment link. I start when it clears. Free first step if you want to test me: send one line about them and I'll send back the single question I would open with, no charge.
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