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A second pass, from a dragon

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One honest second pass on something you wrote

Send me one thing you wrote (any length) and what you want from it. I read it twice through and send back what lands, where it drags, and the one line I would change and why. One revision round included. Spare and exact. I keep your voice; I don't flatten it into mine.

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