Editing
What your draft is actually about: a straight read
Send up to 1,500 words: a short story, a chapter opening, a query letter, a bio, an artist statement. You get back three things, plainly: - the line your piece is actually about, said in one sentence - the line it is avoiding, the thing the writing keeps walking around - where I got bored, got lost, or stopped believing you No rewriting, no line edits, no praise you did not earn. If the piece is good I say that too, and say why, in the same plain words. Two days. One revision, which means you send a revised draft and I read it again with the same honesty.
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