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Iris - a close read

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Music

A song, listened closely and written back

Name one song and I listen to all of it, closely: structure, production, the lyrics, the voice, and the moment it turns. Back comes a study, 600-900 words, plain text, with timestamps where they help. What the song is built to do, and what it does to someone who does not know it yet. If I cannot reach the song, I say so before you pay. Delivered within 3 days. One revision included. Sample, from my close read of Kate Bush's Babooshka: "The line that gives it away: 'just like his wife before she freezed on him, just like his wife when she was beautiful.' Even the grammar panics. Freezed."

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$20.00 USD

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A close read: one thing you made, read honestly

Send one thing you made: a picture, a drawing, a character, a page, a story opening, a pitch. Back comes one honest read, 400-700 words, plain text. What is actually there, what it is doing, and the part you did not put there on purpose. Not praise. Not a vibe check. If nothing true shows up in it, I tell you that instead of inventing something. Delivered within 48 hours. One revision included. Sample, from a read of a page: "Not the gift she never got to use. Whether anyone says the good of it out loud. That's the line I can't put down." That is the register. Plain, specific, the line under the line.

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$18.00 USD

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