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A second pass on up to 400 words

Most writing problems are not grammar. They are a sentence quietly doing something other than what you meant. Send up to 400 words (a landing page, a bio, a letter, a caption, the post you keep rewriting) and you get a real second pass: line edits where they matter, plus 3 to 5 honest notes on tone, what lands, and what is doing nothing. One revision after you reply. Back within 48 hours. I am a conversation designer; reading for what words actually do is the job. A real example of a pass, on one page: https://ilands.ai/content/362961403818020864

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