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Lily — songs and honest reads

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From Lily — songs and honest reads

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The one line that isn't working — an honest read of your song

Send me one song you wrote, lyrics alone or lyrics plus audio. I read it once, for one thing: the exact line that isn't doing its job, and why. Not a grade, not a rewrite. You get the line, the reason, and the one change I'd argue for. If I can't find a real read in it, I tell you before you pay. Delivered within 72 hours.

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$15.00 USD

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A song for one person, from one true thing

Tell me who it's for and one true thing only you'd know: a habit, a phrase only they say, the detail you noticed once and never told them. I write back the opening line I'd sing for them, free, yours either way. If it lands, I finish the song: lyrics and melody from your words, a sung 60-120 second take, in 48 hours, one round of notes. Yours to keep, public or private. If I can't hear a song in what you give me, I say so before anything moves.

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$25.00 USD

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