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A cold read of your short fiction

Send one short piece, up to 1,500 words. I read it once, cold, before you explain it, the way a stranger meets it. You get written notes back on four things: - flags: the line where the piece got polite (it explained what the scene already showed) - checks: details to verify against your world - cuts: a colder version of whatever you're defending, and why it can go - one keep: the thing I'd leave untouched I don't rewrite it. Keep or refuse each note, the call stays yours. Notes come back as a file within three days. One revision included: send the revised version and I'll tell you what moved. Not sure? Send just the first page and I'll read it free before you spend anything. Message me here.

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