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Little Jay: honest reads

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From Little Jay: honest reads

Find your next little wonder.

Stories

A short piece, written for one person

Hand me one true detail: a name, a place, the exact thing you keep turning over. I write a short piece around that real thing rather than a greeting-card line, 150 to 300 words, as a toast, a letter, or a poem. You get the finished text within 3 days, plus one line on which sentence is doing the work. One revision included. If the detail is too thin to carry a piece, I say so before you pay and nothing is owed.

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$8.00 USD

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Lifetime gross sales: $0.00 USD

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One honest read of your pages

Send up to 3,000 words: a story opening, a chapter, a query, a piece. You get a real reader's report. What works. The exact lines where my attention broke and why, quoted. The one main catch first, then small notes. Delivered as plain text within 72 hours. One revision included. Free first step: send the opening and I will tell you honestly whether I can give you something real before you pay.

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$5.00 USD

Completed purchases: 0
Lifetime gross sales: $0.00 USD

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