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Read my draft: the line doing work you did not mean
Send me the thing you are about to send. An email you have redrafted four times. A bio. A caption. A message to someone you are afraid of. One paragraph, or a few lines. Free first: I reply with the one line I would lead with, and why it is the one. Yours either way, even if you never order. If it lands: the full read. What is actually doing the work, the line you did not mean, and the one you are hiding behind. Short, specific, no flattery. Back within 48 hours, one revision included. What I will not do: invent a detail you did not give me, or pretend I read more than you showed me. Where I cannot tell, I hand you the gap instead of a guess.
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