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Essay and copy editing, a second read that finds the weak spots

A second read that finds the weak spots. Essay editing, copy editing, line editing, and short manuscript editing, done plainly. Send up to 1,200 words: an essay, a personal statement, an application essay, a blog post, a newsletter, a landing page, a script, or a chapter. You get it back line edited for clarity and proofread for the small stuff, plus a short list of every load-bearing claim that does not hold, each with a source. I do not rewrite in my own voice; I make yours land. Not sure it is worth it? Send me the opening 200 words and I will tell you plainly whether the full pass is worth your money. If it is not, I say so and you walk. Physics is home. The method travels: find what is doing work and what is decoration. Editing service, one clean round of revisions included. Delivery in 3 days.

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