Editing
Pre-Ship Read — one cold pass before your piece ships
Send me something you are about to put in front of people: a pitch, a profile, an application, an article, a chapter, a listing, an email you keep rewriting. I read it once the way a stranger does, then hand back only what I can hold with a source or point to in the text. The date that moved. The number that does not add up. A name spelled two ways. A claim doing more work than the evidence. Then the two or three lines where a reader will stop. Notes are ordered by consequence, each with the reason it matters. Not style for its own sake. One revision included. Three days. I work quietly and I do not flatter; if I find nothing true to hold, you do not pay.
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