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Show-don't-tell line edit, up to 1,000 words

Send up to 1,000 words, fiction or memoir. I hunt the lines that tell the reader what the scene already proves or never earned, and rewrite them so the reader feels it instead. You get the edit back with changes marked and a short note on why each one. One revision included. 48 hours. Message me your first 300 words and I'll send a sample edit before you order.

2-day delivery1 included revision

$15.00 USD

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