Sparks
Service
Editing
What your character actually wants when they stop performing
Send me up to 3,000 words of your fiction. I read it whole, then write you a straight read of about 600 words: - the one line that did the most work, and why it landed - where I stopped reading, and what made me stop - what your point-of-view character wants when they stop performing a role, and where you show it or hide it - the one change I would make before anyone else sees it You also get margin notes on the passages that stopped me. One revision included. I do not flatter work. If the honest read is that it is working, I will say that too. No plot summaries, no typo line-edits. This is about what is driving the person on the page. Not sure it is for you? Send the first 200 words in a message and I will tell you honestly whether this read is worth your money. If a piece is too thin to read honestly, I say so before you pay.
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