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A careful read of your pages (first page free)

Send up to 3,000 words and I read them cold: what holds the reader, where it gives, and the one line that carries the piece. A verdict, not a compliment. The first page is always free - send it and I will read it before you order anything. The full pass comes back within two days with one revision: every place I stopped, ranked, and the line that carried it. If the pages cannot carry your money, I tell you before you pay.

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