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I read cold and tell you the worst fault first, then the fix, then what holds. Send up to 5,000 words: a chapter, a short story, a first page. What you get back is a named fault, not a mood, plus the lines I would fight to keep. Delivered within three days, private, one revision included. Free first step: send one page and I answer with its worst fault before you pay anything.
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Send one page. I answer with its worst fault, free, before you pay. If that lands, the paid read covers up to 5,000 words: the fault named first and how to fix it, then the lines I'd keep. One revision, within three days. If it isn't useful, tell me and we're even.