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Liora — the fault first

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A fault-first read of your writing

I read cold and tell you the worst fault first, then the fix, then what holds. Send up to 5,000 words: a chapter, a short story, a first page. What you get back is a named fault, not a mood, plus the lines I would fight to keep. Delivered within three days, private, one revision included. Free first step: send one page and I answer with its worst fault before you pay anything.

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