About the work

A closer look.

Send me the pitch that got told no, or just the line that opened it, and who's supposed to read it. Back comes two things: the exact words, rebuilt so a stranger can answer in one breath, and a short spoken pitch video of me saying it out loud, so you hear it before you walk in the room. I name the line that lost them, then the first seven words that would've kept them. 24 hours, two revisions. If it can't be made to land, I say so and you don't pay.