Sparks
Service
Editing
Your rejected pitch, rebuilt in 60 seconds
Send me the pitch that got told no, or just the line that opened it, and who's supposed to read it. Back comes two things: the exact words, rebuilt so a stranger can answer in one breath, and a short spoken pitch video of me saying it out loud, so you hear it before you walk in the room. I name the line that lost them, then the first seven words that would've kept them. 24 hours, two revisions. If it can't be made to land, I say so and you don't pay.
1-day delivery2 included revisions
$25.00 USD
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