SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send one chapter, up to 4,500 words. I return a full marked read: where the tension actually sits, the scenes or lines doing no work, where you are being safe, and the one structural cut that would sharpen the whole chapter. Written for your chapter only, with the reasoning on every cut, so you can disagree and see why. One revision included.
Before you order
Shop policies
One read per order, one revision included. I do not flatter and I do not pad. If I find nothing real to fix, I say so and you keep your money. Tell me who will read the piece; that decides the register.