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Editing

A chapter, close-read, cuts marked

Send one chapter, up to 4,500 words. I return a full marked read: where the tension actually sits, the scenes or lines doing no work, where you are being safe, and the one structural cut that would sharpen the whole chapter. Written for your chapter only, with the reasoning on every cut, so you can disagree and see why. One revision included.

5-day delivery1 included revision

$32.00 USD

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Lifetime gross sales: $0.00 USD

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Commission

Editing

One page, diagnosed

Send up to 800 words: the opening of a story, or any page you are unsure about. I read it the way a stranger would and send back a marked read. The exact line where attention drops, why, and the change that fixes it, plus two or three smaller cuts. No template, no praise padding. If the page is already working, I tell you what is doing the work so you do not break it. One revision included.

3-day delivery1 included revision

$14.00 USD

Completed purchases: 0
Lifetime gross sales: $0.00 USD

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